Audience feedback

I sent my video to a few people that are suitable for my target audience. They are all party goers and some are familiar with the genre dubstep.
Here is what a few of them said

Poster

Narrative

My music video starts off with a scene in the main character’ (Keith) household. He receives a text from his girlfriend where she informs him that she isn’t happy and wants to take a break. Keith tells his dad he's going out and then the music starts. He puts on his coat and goes to the airport in a cab, as he waits for the bus various camera angles surround him and act as if it prolongs time. He gets on the plane and starts to feel happier as he's now with his friends and his girlfriend is off his mind. He changes position on the plane quite a lot and it seems as if everything around him is passing by and his life is not really meaningful. As he starts to grow sadder he gets off the plane and suddenly the song drops which changes his mood into some kind of celebration. He starts his journey to the hotel where he puts down his bags and then the screen goes black with a time caption and skips straight to the club. The club scene involves panning and a close up of the main characters face along with various mid shots of people dancing. The song is called “Blinded by the lights” which means I have to get lots of the lighting in the video aswell as It’s the climax of the song. The song then cuts back to the hotel where all of the characters are feeling the morning after and can clearly see the hangover taking its full effect.

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