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Animatic Storyboard

This is my first plan of a Animatic Storyboard, I may change due to me finding a better location.

To cut the long story short here is my storyboard in steps.

1. Close up of phone (naturalistic) saying "Getting off bus now"

2. Gets text saying "Its really not working"

3. Stresses out on bus, lots of cuts of head against window ect.

4. Changes position while camera angle is still.

5.Close up of rain on window.

6. Exiting the Bus coming down stairs

7. POV shot of face sad

8. Grabs phone tries to ring girlfriend

9. Dual split screen shot of girlfriend and character (going to shoot a shot where I turn off my phone to see what looks better.)

10. Goes angry starts walking about (also record getting happier to see whats better.)

11. Calls friend and starts getting happier.

12. Turns off Phone

13. Drinks and smokes to create party vibe.

14. Close ups of drink

15. Shots of friends smiling and drinking and dancing Maybe shoot someone sleeping at end to show end of night.

Back cover sketch

Front cover sketch

Shot List

Shot List

Storyboard

This is my storyboard which I have sketched out.

Location Recce

Location Recce

Risk Assesment

Risk Assessment

My idea has changed!

My idea for my music video has changed along with the storyboard. I wanted the video to be emotional and to show a drunken state as the original song and video shows this. The storyboard that I have now chosen is a lot easier to shoot as it is on a bus, in an alleyway at my house and at a garage. Also the props and the new cast is a lot more reliable.

First scene Shot

I have already shot my final scene as it was hard to get a place where we were alowed to smoke at the location. I knew someone who knew a garage and they let us film there. Most of the shots were Mid shots or close ups showing people drinking/smoking or laughing. This brings a happy freindly mood and shows the contrast between my main characters relationship with his girlfreind breaking down.

Luckily I have found a better location for all of my scenes so I will keep the story line and the main plot but instead use a lot more interesting location for all of them